The story of the death of a fellow employee, and finding the irony of the situation...
With music and audio to boot.
Pretty good for a first try! I'd say try rehearsing it a couple of times or making bullet points to cut down on the "ya knows" and stuff, but I do think it adds to the tone and I really liked the editing with the music. Perfect cuts for when the beat stopped. Keep at it!
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